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  • Did the poet intervene on the text? Meaning, is this something new, or is it merely a summarized version of the original text?
    Something new.
  • Does the work fit in the category that it's been placed?
    Arousal says it all.
  • Can you hear the poet's voice in the new narrative?
    Yes.
  • Does the poem work on it's own? Grammatically and syntactically, is it solid, just like a non-found poem should be?
    It's hard to tell in the visual format - well, for me it's hard to tell.
  • Is there a narrative here, or is it just a list? Does the poem SAY anything?
    I think it says just enough.